day tripper

The rainbow dots of my vision started to swirl from the light I just stared into for far too long, blinking rapidly away at them as I concentrated on a ...

Sliding into the front seat I grip the steering wheel tightly, first day of school. Junior year, second year at this school. Transferred halfway through freshman year, forced to attend ...

Hello! This was cute! Made me giggle at 7:40 in the morning :D Charlie grumbled, nibbling on what remained of last night's twenty-three boxes of pizza and spinning around on ...

Wow, are you sure you don't know my family? Because, I'm pretty sure you just wrote a short piece about them. Except, in my family, I'm the dancer, writer and ...

The only clue my dad gave me as to who Octavia was and what she looked like was a tall, slender woman with crazy orange hair and vibrant green eyes ...

This was beautiful! I was very engrossed in the feelings, but don't get too carried away with those metaphors! Simplicity is a wonderful thing in some situations, my dear. Anyways, ...

Skins has covered a majority of the reviewing for this piece, but I'll still share my opinion on the overall story. It was short handed for me. The writing and ...

Mrs Felly won't see me... This should be Mrs. Felly with a period. "Mandy?" came the shrill voice. The 'c' in came should be capitalized. I noticed many little things ...

Oh my...there's something ironic, I'm reviewing and I put knew instead of new. Haha, sorry!

Wow, out off the three years I've been apart of the YWS, I've never seen a post so short have so much potential. This is incomplete, though. I feel like ...

Thank you both a lot! :D I know it wasn't much of an attention grabber, but I didn't want to post more and have way too much for just a ...

It's been a really long time, and I'm about to go review but I wanted to get this off my chest first; rough day, lads/: Welks, any feedback of any ...

I don't expect you to respond, but I'm freaking myself out. I'm killing myself with my own thoughts. As of recent, my anger has been the sole proprietor of my ...

Thanks for the review, Justis! As I said, I would return the favor. Well, I'm a big romance reader so this sparked my interest, but when I started to read ...

I like to keep it classy and simple, I'll review something of who ever reviews my work. Greatly appreciated. Grasp. Click. Rewind. I continued the process until my little digits ...